洗練された技術はないものの、キャンバスから(きゃんばすから)飛び出すような圧倒的(あっとうてき)な生命力(せいめいりょく)

The sketches Kimoto sent, though lacking in refined technique, were filled with an overwhelming vitality, as if Hokkaido's rough waves and the workers' grim expressions would leap off the canvas. In his paintings, 'I' sensed a cry of the soul (the agony of coming into being) that simply had to express itself beyond a mere hobby, receiving a deep shock and moved.